Not bad at all
Pretty good. Much better than a lot of the other crap I've heard in the audio portal. It kinda peeves me that this song is FAR from being industrial, though. Mind you, I haven't heard a single real industrial song on here yet, though.
Good job. And have fun with Reason! It's a great piece of software, which I've been using for some time now. If you need any pointers or tips, feel free to ask.